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The Elements

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The first time I wrote this was actually sometime ago. ^^; I kept putting it off because I was never sure of it - if it was good and the likes. But because of myself and many stupid actions on my part, it got deleted with many other files and (to my horror) all of my stories that I wrote in my spare time.

Anyways, I decided to rewrite it because I felt a deep emotion to the subject. I was originally inspired to write the poem because of what people around me seemed to think about the "element" darkness. I honestly wanted an answer to a question that bothered me for a great amount of time; what is so bad about darkness? I began to ponder the question and I came up with a conclusion - which is described in this poem.

The first version was so blunt that I didn't want to repeat it - ever. :XD: This one is a bit more cryptic, but I kept the same underlying idea. Can you figure it out? I will award the winner a :cookie:. :XD:

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